| 2003/06/22 21:53:39 PDT by Dev [manager] |
Section 1
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A few suggestions were made to make Syne's vision weirder, such as have Syne physically aware of himself in the dream yet unable to interact with people or things there.
Section 2
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Explanation: Syne is not quite himself--he's responding with a hint of Kydran's edge and anxiety. Cade's comment provokes this response, which Syne bases on the cliche of a "normal life." Indeed, someone could argue with him that he never had a "normal life," and they'd be right.
Section 3
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Explanation: Cade's apparent grudge versus Dell stems from the conflict that arose after Syne's death. He avoids the situation and doesn't participate in the search.
Section 4
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An issue arose with how much remorse Kydran should volunteer when he meets with the party. While he is indeed genuine, the characters and also the player might believe he's being superficial.
Section 5
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An idea for a flashback when Ko admits his crime was shot down; we don't want to over-use that particular device, and it doesn't fit the context anyway.
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A few comments on the severity of Ko's act on Dell. Is it too much, or would it let Dell's intelligence and his capacity to forgive have a moment to shine?
Section 6
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Insert generic motivational catch phrase into dialogue here. (And here, and here, and here...)