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Dell's Cave/Theme is IN.
2005/06/17 14:35:49 PDT by Stix [0/49]
Awards: 5 from Dev
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An Antarean that lives by himself for all but his entire young life is sure to be a little...weird.... so someone suggested I take the beginning part of one of my other songs and make that his 'cave' theme or something...and I'm surprised it came out this way. (Which is to say, almost exactly how I imagined it to sound...)

I think this song sounds obnoxious... the Tuba makes Dell seem like some big galumphing idiot..when he's really not. He's just different. But it seems empty without it.

Any changes you want to make to it, go right ahead.

Added at 2005/06/17 14:45:27 PDT

Alright..for some reason it's not working for me right now. I dunno how to fix it. *Slams head to desk*

2005/06/17 15:04:30 PDT by mystik3eb [0/43]
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Hahahaha, I LIKE it! That's pretty cool!

2005/06/17 15:05:03 PDT by Dev [manager]
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Er... what's not working? :\

Anyway, this piece definitely works ... though maybe not for Dell entirely. Perhaps just a silly scene involving him, but the melody and your instrumentation makes it very charming. Again, the only gripe (and not a major one, given this is a newly formed idea--I assume) is that it would need to be expanded upon, maybe throw in a few harmonic changes to add to the melody. But it sounds like you had fun with this. Nice work.

2005/06/17 15:09:36 PDT by Stix [0/49]
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Hunh...well, it's not working for me and I don't know why. Maybe it's just me.

But I shouldn't complain as it I have it on my computer and, well, silly me, I WROTE it.

Harmonic changes: in progress. I'm looking at some old piano song I made up...but ruined cause of added junk that ended up being last-minute experimentation for no good reason. I liked it the way it was..so I shall fix that henceforth, forthwith, and so forth.

*Wipes the sweat from her brow* Well... Off to work. I hope we're in no hurry.

Added at 2005/06/17 15:32:37 PDT

How 'bout a melody change right in the middle of the song, like... after the first two 'choruses' there's a change... then back to the chours? 'Cause that's what I did..in all of..well.... 20 minutes?

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