I will give one point for each spelling or grammatical error that you guys can find in the large amount of text I wrote today. I may give more points for good suggestions for how to improve the text.

The main thing I did today was write up the how-to section, though anything other section I edited today also counts, so check the activity tracker.

Note that I said "section", not "post". Thus, the error in the last sentence of the above post doesn't count. -_-

(Gee, that was ironic.)

Home -> The Project: Refers to the section as if discussions will occur, yet there is no way to post on any of the pages within...not anything super, it's just a change in this will avoid future confusion and maybe people going "it says we can talk here, but I can't post anywhere!"

Home -> The Project -> Introduction: Very very very minor note, really, but under "3" it says we've been around for over 2 years...quite a bit more than 2 years, isn't it? =)

Home-> The Project -> How to Use This Site -> Award System:

1. Under "Do not brag about points" it says "your points totals are displayed..." Either the word "points" should not be plural (just fits better) or the paragraph could change referring to the total from plural to singular, depending on how you wanna look at it. That's my take, at least.

2. Second to last paragraph, again is mispelt as "agian."

Home -> The Game -> Setting -> Groups -> Pylos Mining Corp.:

1. First paragraph: Titan continent (capitalize "continent?" Is "Titan Continent" its name, or is it just "Titan?").

2. First paragraph: "buniness" (business, I believe)

3. Second paragraph: "head-scrating" (scratching, I believe...lol)

Now to test links:

Home -> The Project -> Introduction: The link to Dev's profile goes to a "Not found" page

Home -> The Project -> Staff: The links to Dev and Temp go to the Home page (shouldn't they go to their profiles? Same issue as before)

Clicking on Home in the activity tracker goes back to the Activity Tracker (basically refreshes it) instead of actually going to "Home"...is this normal?

Home -> The Project -> How to Use This Site -> Award System: The link says "open tasks." For the sake of uniformity...shouldn't it be "current tasks?"

Home -> The Game -> Setting -> Groups -> Pylos Mining Crop.: None of the links work

This is my proofread of what's been updated thus far. And out of curiosity's sake, when will the official images for characters with official images be placed on their pages?

Home -> The Project:

1. The link to "Introduction" is incorrect

2. Description of "Introduction": Maybe should say "join the project" instead of "join in the project."

3. Description of "How to Use This Site: "...to posts to..." Posting would flow better...*shrug*

Home -> The Game -> Characters -> Player Characters -> Rheya: Second paragraph: "chuck of ore" (chunk [of eumonite?])

Just wondering if appending the post actually isn't supposed to update the thread, cuz right now it doesn't. With that note, I appended my post yet again.

I don't think most of these are newly-written or -amended pages, but I've noticed a few errors which could stand fixing nonetheless. :)

The Game > Setting > Locations > Titan Continent > Avemy
Toward the end of the second paragraph, Gygans are referred to as Petrolans.

The Game > Setting > Locations > Titan Continent > Camp Nimbus
"More wealthy" is incorrect grammar; however, the whole first sentence flows kind of awkwardly, so I'd probably just rework it as something like, "Catering to the whims of the wealthy, a prestigious inn agency built Camp Nimbus in a most remarkable locale. For a hefty price..." I'd also drop the second instance of "construction" in the last sentence.

The Game > Setting > Locations > Titan Continent > Io
Again, the first sentence is a bit clumsy. (No offense meant to whomever wrote these. :-p) A possible rewrite: "Isolated in the far North, the town of Io graces an island on the edge of the world's tropical zone." The beginning of the second paragraph, as well, might be worded better. "...includes members of all the world's races, excepting dragons," perhaps?

The Game > Setting > Locations > Titan Continent > Port Korra / Beniport
*grimace* This one should be fun, haha. Let's see... "The ruling family of Port Korra, from whom its name derived, long maintained an isolationist attitude toward trade with other cities. About twelve years before the game, a man named Benivalle gained power among young members of the upper class, whose economic ambitions left them increasingly discontent. Leveraging their support, Benivalle secretly but forcefully drove the Korras from the city. On being told that their rulers had abandoned them, citizens embraced Benivalle as their new ruler and renamed the city Beniport in his honor."
Now, the final sentence on the page claims that Benivalle's expansionist trade policies failed, but I have to say that doesn't make a lot of sense. Beniport is a port - a natural funnel for goods from other townships. The Korras, quite honestly, were wrong. Opening to trade could hardly fail to reap benefits. So, I submit that we focus on the latter point, which is that, however lucrative this expansion became, ever-steeper taxes gave most of the profits to Benivalle and left his subjects worse off than they'd been originally.

Blast. Looks like I don't have time to finish this section right now - I have to go run a spotlight for a play! More will come later.

Hi, btw. ^_^

Hi also :o

Found a few mistakes in the "How To Use This Site" section.

Forum code, last paragraph: "This page, for example, uses the above two menthods"

Submitting files ToS: "First and formost,"

Basics>Registering: "You can find a list of these sites here [TODO: Link to evlan.org's site list]."
Don't know if that's supposed to be there but it looks weird.

also in the "Staff" page, Advisory staff paragraph: "Advisory positions are not permenant."

Good to see you back, Siemova ... though, apparently not back again, yet. I was going to wait until you continued, but realized there wasn't any real reason, so I've rewarded your rewrites so far appropriately (more than one point each since you came up with the corrections yourself as well). I hope you decide to continue, since you've had some insightful commentary on top of the well-written edits (some of which I tweaked, but can mostly be found verbatim in those sections now).