|2005/05/31 20:27:11 PDT by Dev [manager]
What you have sort of reminds me of Chrono Cross music, for some reason, which is never a bad thing. On the one hand, the melody is very flexible; here you have a soft, slower piano accompaniment, whereas you could totally adapt the melody to many other varied arrangments. On the other hand, this comes at the cost of complexity, and there's nothing you do with this melody that's particularly memorable. It would need to be used very consistently and often for the player to really identify it as referring to Enna, in fact.
So that's kind of a short, mixed review ... hopefully it can help you in revising and extending. In my opinion, this submission has, at the least, made a very good entrance for you.