| 2005/05/31 19:11:29 PDT by Riven [0/10] Awards: 6 from Dev |
Sorry, but I can't figure out how to get my program to make it an mp3 file. Here's the music file though. I know it should be a little harsher, but this is just a mini version, I plan to extend it a bit. I could use some constructive criticism.
| 2005/05/31 20:27:11 PDT by Dev [manager] |
What you have sort of reminds me of Chrono Cross music, for some reason, which is never a bad thing. On the one hand, the melody is very flexible; here you have a soft, slower piano accompaniment, whereas you could totally adapt the melody to many other varied arrangments. On the other hand, this comes at the cost of complexity, and there's nothing you do with this melody that's particularly memorable. It would need to be used very consistently and often for the player to really identify it as referring to Enna, in fact.
So that's kind of a short, mixed review ... hopefully it can help you in revising and extending. In my opinion, this submission has, at the least, made a very good entrance for you.
| 2005/06/01 00:19:50 PDT by Temporal [manager] |
Just to note, Riven tells me that there is supposed to be a flute and a violin in this, but the MIDI came out wrong. He says he'll work on getting an mp3 together this weekend.
| 2005/06/03 21:50:27 PDT by Riven [0/10] |
mp3 is now up so all of it should be audible. The slow part is sort of reflecting on her past and how her home was destroyed. The faster part is reflecting on her present state. That's about it.
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