Very nice work with this, especially when it comes to arrangement. The changes in tempo mark off different sections well enough without changing the overall tone of the piece, while bridging them together with some nice dynamics. I'm also glad that, since this was an MP3 submission, the sample quality is right about where we should be working. (If you're using a newer-generation SB card though, a little EAX reverb wouldn't hurt. Recording that can be a little tricky, though.)

Definitely sets out what I think you meant to accomplish, though I'm not sure there are really any appropriate "happy" towns in the FoI story. I'll certainly keep this in mind, though. Keep up the good work!