An Antarean that lives by himself for all but his entire young life is sure to be a little...weird.... so someone suggested I take the beginning part of one of my other songs and make that his 'cave' theme or something...and I'm surprised it came out this way. (Which is to say, almost exactly how I imagined it to sound...)

I think this song sounds obnoxious... the Tuba makes Dell seem like some big galumphing idiot..when he's really not. He's just different. But it seems empty without it.

Any changes you want to make to it, go right ahead.

Alright..for some reason it's not working for me right now. I dunno how to fix it. *Slams head to desk*

Er... what's not working? :\

Anyway, this piece definitely works ... though maybe not for Dell entirely. Perhaps just a silly scene involving him, but the melody and your instrumentation makes it very charming. Again, the only gripe (and not a major one, given this is a newly formed idea--I assume) is that it would need to be expanded upon, maybe throw in a few harmonic changes to add to the melody. But it sounds like you had fun with this. Nice work.